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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D7000
Shutter Speed
1/40 second
Aperture
F/2.8
Focal Length
35 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Jun 28, 2013, 10:47:06 AM
Software
Paint Shop Pro Photo 12,00
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:iconnicolazanarini:
Hello,

While the colors are indeed stunning and the overrall composition can be said to be good, what really takes away from this picture is your choice of aperture in combination with the chosen angle- while I understand that you wanted to only take a detail of the whole flower while keeping the rest in background, as you may notice this also caused (mostly becuase of the angle, but the out of focus areas add to it) a distorsion in the transition from the petals to the rest of the flower, thus making that area "artificial" a slight change in the angle (say 15 degree right and 5-10 degrees up wou8ld likely fix that while still allowing you to go for a 2.8 aperture (which si however quite open for a close-up macro shots, with a few exeptions allowed) so I'd suggest using an f4.

Hope you find this useful,

Good shooting,

Nicola
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prettyflour Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This has been featured in my journal.  

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FrancescaDelfino Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you :iconpurplebutterflyplz:
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nadyabogo Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist
It is really beautiful but you should focus more on the centre of the flower :) (Smile) 
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FrancescaDelfino Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much and yes, I agree about focus :)
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mecengineer Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
excellent
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FrancescaDelfino Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you so much
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ilNeofita Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
fantastica foto!
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arualcat Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013
:iconwowplz: Nice photo!
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snoogaloo Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the color and the focus of this shot a lot!
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tanikel Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013   Photographer
What a beautiful flower!  Great choice of background color, it compliments the vibrant, firey-ness of the petals. 
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