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My world in a bubble

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Image size
850x850px 125.54 KB
Make
FUJIFILM
Model
FinePix JZ300
Shutter Speed
1/105 second
Aperture
F/5.3
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
400
Date Taken
Jul 8, 2012, 12:39:47 AM
Sensor Size
1mm
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Introductory I would like to say that this is a really nice photo with a nicely simple concept behind it. So, as it is a simple design, I hope you don't mind a bit shorter critique as there aren't much points to think of for me.

So, most of the time artists use the description to express their own feelings about the picture, in this case however there is only the title informing me about your vision behind this shot.
So, expressing the smallness and fragility of one's world with a little soup-bubble is a very unique idea and maybe not strongly intuitive for a viewer passing by. However, I really like how you blurred the background, inducing One would only have a focus on his own little world, while the big surrounding becomes less important.
So, I think 4/5 stars for vision would be appropriate.

Regarding originality I have to say, I have often seen a soap-bubble standing for a personal world or mind. however, the idea of letting it reflect its surrounding this perfectly and the solution of having only one layer of focus on the bubble with the idea of less important background is unique to me and worth mentioning.
With that I gave you 4/5 stars for originality.

I think the best part of this is the execution, the technique. The chose of reflecting colours and the sharpness of the bubble is really great. It's also beautiful how you managed to get the whole surrounding within the reflection!
The composition is also very nice as the bubble not just stands in the middle like a unmoving, boring orb, but just stands a bit at the upper part like it is still floating within the picture.
That lead me to gave you 5/5 stars for technique!

The hardest part to explain is always impact, as it is the emotional impact that a image gave me when seeing first.
So, I really liked it when I saw it first and instantly wanted to look into its details more. It's a nice composition and due to its simpleness it's easy for my eyes to find a resting-point. Well, I still have to reduce this rating by 0.5 stars as it isn't a picture that lead me to remember it, so I can come back once in a while to take a look at it and feel the same again. So, that would make 4.5/5 stars for impact.

So, concluding this is a very nicely done shot of a well thought out motive, it only lacks a bit in creativity, but no one can be unique all the time. So, I still think this part of the top photo-shots in the abstract-class that are here on deviantart.


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